Just tried the game. I think the plot outlined is def interesting and the characters are fairly well established. I do have a few gripes however.
My first gripe is the system for locating the hidden money wastes a lot of valuable story time. This can be easily dealt with by just adding little cash icons littered throughout each area if you chose to keep the system. This will tell players what to look for rather than being forced to spam click the map in a desperate bid to gain a little more cash.
My second issue is that one of the most important locations you need to improve your stats, the park, is not currently available and this stops you from progressing toward the starting goals set forth by the game. This is an issue because it stops the players from doing the most basic of story progress.
As I said at the start of the comment I believe this has potential to be a very good story but at present it is not what I would call a "playable game".
I like the concept but I'll hold off for now, just doesn't sit right with me, feels like a cash grab right now, think I'll come back in a few months and see if I've been proven wrong.
Androids touch function seems pretty unstable, had a pretty hard time when first launching and had to click some spots several times to get it to activate. Wasn't much to do at all, when's the next update?
Everything is indicated, either you have reached the end of the game and if you move the mouse over the park it indicates that it will be available at v0.2 or you want to access it directly and you have not read the objectives on the left side of the screen
A smooth start with solid foundation. As other people stated, UI is the first thing I liked. It's very clean and easy to use. Art is beautiful, characters seem to have a variety of unique personalities, story is intriguing with the mysteries we have. In short, great start for a great game :)
I really love the idea and stuff. The art style is awesome! I can see this game has high potential. And I love how he has a Dreamcast :P
I'm curious are you going to do some activities to level relationships? Like playing the console, or watching a movie, or going mall (if there is one that is) with the person you want to get to know better.
damn, this game was lit, the MC, the art style, the map!, the concept, theme! especially the UI is stunning, great work, the journal kinda thingy(quests section) is really handy and so easy to access.... can't wait for this in the further updates....and the Yoooooo sound makes me funny idk maybe because I only heard it often in meme xD... good day -robi
I agree with all the other comments, great art style, the UI is very clean and the story is interesting. I'm looking forward to how things progress.
The only gripe that I have is the locking of other dialogue options once one is selected. I like to see what characters have to say to the choices I make even if I've already decided on one. Having to save before a choice and then loading that save each time you want to see what the response would have been is a little annoying.
Hi, thanks for your feedback, I understand that blocked choices can generate some frustration. For the moment you are the first one to tell me, if ever I receive more feedback of this type, I will unblock the choices :)
The story set up is also really nice, the UI is genius and the tutorial was easy to follow and simple, the language was proper and the dialogues seemed right(compared to several other games where the language in the conversations are a bit off or odd).
I honestly liked everything about the game so far, only issue is that there isn't enough of it xD.
The UI is certainly the high-point here and I dont mean that in a bad way. Its clean, well-thought out and looks very professional as well and giving this game a very destinct feel from the copy and paste-menus of most games like this.
And the overall art-style is also pretty high. This clearly has some high production value here.
Yes, so far it was very promising! I thought the language was actually very good (as opposed to somebody complaining on a certain forum) and the quantity of text was good (some other games have problems with writing too much [but saying nothing]).
The financial logic of the story is silly but I think it should be taken as a kind of humor set up.
The flag is a problem in one country with lots of gamers. Wouldn't be fair if a video showed the game that way after an apology and announcing it will be replaced.
By the way, I have to agree with Devious - the tutorial in the beginning was good. Only a few icons were a bit easy to miss but compared to how other games overload the UI this is very friendly
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great begining of a game, not so much playble right now but i'll follow this one, waiting for 0.2
geart ART
great writing
I want to play the full version one day.
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the game :)
Mate I tried playing this on android and it keeps crashing I'm on samsung a11 anyway to fix this the game looks like it has a lot of potential
Okay i just want to say, the game is very laggy on my laptop although it's a great game overall.
There are so many guys I hope you will not turn it into NTR.. Just please Don't
Just tried the game. I think the plot outlined is def interesting and the characters are fairly well established. I do have a few gripes however.
My first gripe is the system for locating the hidden money wastes a lot of valuable story time. This can be easily dealt with by just adding little cash icons littered throughout each area if you chose to keep the system. This will tell players what to look for rather than being forced to spam click the map in a desperate bid to gain a little more cash.
My second issue is that one of the most important locations you need to improve your stats, the park, is not currently available and this stops you from progressing toward the starting goals set forth by the game. This is an issue because it stops the players from doing the most basic of story progress.
As I said at the start of the comment I believe this has potential to be a very good story but at present it is not what I would call a "playable game".
Bruh. My guy, the game ain't finished.
I like the concept but I'll hold off for now, just doesn't sit right with me, feels like a cash grab right now, think I'll come back in a few months and see if I've been proven wrong.
Androids touch function seems pretty unstable, had a pretty hard time when first launching and had to click some spots several times to get it to activate. Wasn't much to do at all, when's the next update?
I can't find the park in android. There hasn't marked park in the map
Park isn't implemented yet.
This game is grand, I actually downloaded it cause It showed here and on GameJolt as well.
When is the next update?
The game ended before i went to the park, my disappointment is immeasurable, and my day is ruined, just joking nice star of the game
It's a great game, but how does one go to the park??
Thank you,
Everything is indicated, either you have reached the end of the game and if you move the mouse over the park it indicates that it will be available at v0.2 or you want to access it directly and you have not read the objectives on the left side of the screen
Great game.😍
A smooth start with solid foundation. As other people stated, UI is the first thing I liked. It's very clean and easy to use. Art is beautiful, characters seem to have a variety of unique personalities, story is intriguing with the mysteries we have. In short, great start for a great game :)
Thanks a lot, there are high expectations, I will do my best not to disappoint people :)
i love it
A strong start, the art is awesom
Thanks, and what is to come will be even better ;)
I really love the idea and stuff. The art style is awesome! I can see this game has high potential. And I love how he has a Dreamcast :P
I'm curious are you going to do some activities to level relationships? Like playing the console, or watching a movie, or going mall (if there is one that is) with the person you want to get to know better.
Yes it is indeed planned, the content of the game will gradually expand with the updates
damn, this game was lit, the MC, the art style, the map!, the concept, theme! especially the UI is stunning, great work, the journal kinda thingy(quests section) is really handy and so easy to access.... can't wait for this in the further updates....and the Yoooooo sound makes me funny idk maybe because I only heard it often in meme xD... good day
-robi
Thanks for your comment, I'm glad you liked this little effect
yo al ver la portada
se ve de puta madre y me encanta la interfaz minimalista
I agree with all the other comments, great art style, the UI is very clean and the story is interesting. I'm looking forward to how things progress.
The only gripe that I have is the locking of other dialogue options once one is selected. I like to see what characters have to say to the choices I make even if I've already decided on one. Having to save before a choice and then loading that save each time you want to see what the response would have been is a little annoying.
Hi, thanks for your feedback, I understand that blocked choices can generate some frustration. For the moment you are the first one to tell me, if ever I receive more feedback of this type, I will unblock the choices :)
First of all, the art is phenomenal.
The story set up is also really nice, the UI is genius and the tutorial was easy to follow and simple, the language was proper and the dialogues seemed right(compared to several other games where the language in the conversations are a bit off or odd).
I honestly liked everything about the game so far, only issue is that there isn't enough of it xD.
I'm very excited for future updates!
Thanks for your feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed the game, I'm already working on the next version.
The UI is certainly the high-point here and I dont mean that in a bad way. Its clean, well-thought out and looks very professional as well and giving this game a very destinct feel from the copy and paste-menus of most games like this.
And the overall art-style is also pretty high. This clearly has some high production value here.
I always liked web design, and especially minimalism,
"less is more"
The art is absolutely amazing, and whoever made the UI deserves a raise. Excited to see where this goes!
Thank you sir!
beautiful art!
Thanks a lot for your let's play, I hope you enjoyed playing the game? I see that you have blurred the flag, it will be corrected very soon
Yes, so far it was very promising! I thought the language was actually very good (as opposed to somebody complaining on a certain forum) and the quantity of text was good (some other games have problems with writing too much [but saying nothing]).
The financial logic of the story is silly but I think it should be taken as a kind of humor set up.
The flag is a problem in one country with lots of gamers. Wouldn't be fair if a video showed the game that way after an apology and announcing it will be replaced.
By the way, I have to agree with Devious - the tutorial in the beginning was good. Only a few icons were a bit easy to miss but compared to how other games overload the UI this is very friendly