the art is amazing, I loved it, I'm really looking forward to the next update. in fact, i'm brazilian and i don't know a lot of english, but i liked it just the same.
Hi, this isn't directly related to the game, but what happened to the discord server? Will a second one be made if it was really hacked? Also I love the game so far, the art is beautiful.
All I can say is wow ... im shocked at how good this looks the charachters, the backgrounds, the ui everything just seems to be perfect. I admire your work and couldn't be more exited for the next update. Keep up the good work!!!
I let out the deepest, loudest groan of despair and agony when the game stopped as I was going to the park. I want MORE! The art and the unique UI feels VERY PREMIUM and the plot (while a little generic) has a really special feel to it. The characters for me are the most interesting part, especially the sister. The fuckin thumbnails made me so excited for that scene with the sister ( you tease >:[ )
The dialogue is great! It feels natural and flows well, environment art is top notch, im usually a hard critique when it comes to the comedy but the humor in this one, i'll let it pass lol. And while i've said this before, the UI is certainly one of, if not, the best i've seen in any VN. For me, making a great UI isn't a hard thing to accomplish with a great imagination but you've done it, bravo.
The only criticisms i can give are:
-The Tutorial. I really liked the concept, it is slick and smooth. However, the tools become really hard to see, and for casual, clicky VN players like me, you tend to miss a bit of tools and how they work. I would suggest arrows, more highlighting, or even scaling it up for a second for the player to notice easily.
-The Hidden Money. I didn't really like that mini-system, it gets really tiring for a while clicking everywhere on the screen in hopes of getting free money. The best you can do with it is to tweak it so that the money is actually visible and you'd actually have to use your eyes to get them, doesn't matter if the art is small or not, just make it be that there is a visual advantage.
-The MC's look. This is more of a personal critic for me but i was hoping you could make the MC stand out more. He looks really plain and generic and it kind of bothers me. It's up to you though, no pressure.
Great game solid 9/10, I literally cannot wait for more. I am at the point of refreshing this page everyday for updates :P
I couldn't leave such a constructive comment without answering for too long. Thanks for all these compliments, it made my day.
I spent a lot of time designing the game's UI, I didn't like it, too static, too basic, boring to death. I even hired an artist specialized in ui but I didn't like the rendering either...
I decided to do it myself in the end and I don't regret the result.
For the tutorial I agree, some arrows would not be too much. I couldn't find any good brushes so I preferred to leave them empty rather than putting something ugly.
The hidden money is an obviously controversial mechanic, but I repeat it is not obligatory. It just gives a bonus of money (which is not useful for the moment). In v0.2 the points where the money is hidden will be indicated except in the new backgrounds.
The look of the mc is generic and it's a choice that has been wanted, the game will follow a shonen/seinen type of development, so the look is likely to change over time.
There is no need to update the page, version 0.2 was announced in late June and early July, the bosses will be able to play it 3 weeks before everyone else.
Knowing how you made the UI by yourself in the end makes me really proud. All the hard work has paid off and you delivered such an excellent work. Hard to believe this is just the first version of the game, lol.
Regarding the hidden money, I didn't even know that it was such a controversial thing, but I completely understand. Though It's nice to know that the mechanic will be tweaked/taken initiative in the near future. After all it's just the first version of the game.
About the MC's look, holy cow, that mention of the shounen/seinen type of development really caught me off guard. Now im REALLY intrigued on what this game has in store for us. I really can't wait, haven't seen VN's like these with a future so promising and bright (I've read your Patreon page). And just like that, im fine with the MC looking like that now.
I'm very glad that we have authors like you in the VN industry. I hope you and your hardworking team eventually get all the support that you all deserve to deliver an excellent VN. That being said, I would definitely support you no doubt if I have the opportunity, maybe in the near future. We're all in this together... Can't wait for what you have for us next in this beautiful game, goodluck and godspeed!
Sincerely, me.
P.S. Sorry for the bad grammar, English isn't my first language.
Just tried the game. I think the plot outlined is def interesting and the characters are fairly well established. I do have a few gripes however.
My first gripe is the system for locating the hidden money wastes a lot of valuable story time. This can be easily dealt with by just adding little cash icons littered throughout each area if you chose to keep the system. This will tell players what to look for rather than being forced to spam click the map in a desperate bid to gain a little more cash.
My second issue is that one of the most important locations you need to improve your stats, the park, is not currently available and this stops you from progressing toward the starting goals set forth by the game. This is an issue because it stops the players from doing the most basic of story progress.
As I said at the start of the comment I believe this has potential to be a very good story but at present it is not what I would call a "playable game".
I like the concept but I'll hold off for now, just doesn't sit right with me, feels like a cash grab right now, think I'll come back in a few months and see if I've been proven wrong.
Androids touch function seems pretty unstable, had a pretty hard time when first launching and had to click some spots several times to get it to activate. Wasn't much to do at all, when's the next update?
Everything is indicated, either you have reached the end of the game and if you move the mouse over the park it indicates that it will be available at v0.2 or you want to access it directly and you have not read the objectives on the left side of the screen
A smooth start with solid foundation. As other people stated, UI is the first thing I liked. It's very clean and easy to use. Art is beautiful, characters seem to have a variety of unique personalities, story is intriguing with the mysteries we have. In short, great start for a great game :)
I really love the idea and stuff. The art style is awesome! I can see this game has high potential. And I love how he has a Dreamcast :P
I'm curious are you going to do some activities to level relationships? Like playing the console, or watching a movie, or going mall (if there is one that is) with the person you want to get to know better.
damn, this game was lit, the MC, the art style, the map!, the concept, theme! especially the UI is stunning, great work, the journal kinda thingy(quests section) is really handy and so easy to access.... can't wait for this in the further updates....and the Yoooooo sound makes me funny idk maybe because I only heard it often in meme xD... good day -robi
I agree with all the other comments, great art style, the UI is very clean and the story is interesting. I'm looking forward to how things progress.
The only gripe that I have is the locking of other dialogue options once one is selected. I like to see what characters have to say to the choices I make even if I've already decided on one. Having to save before a choice and then loading that save each time you want to see what the response would have been is a little annoying.
Hi, thanks for your feedback, I understand that blocked choices can generate some frustration. For the moment you are the first one to tell me, if ever I receive more feedback of this type, I will unblock the choices :)
The story set up is also really nice, the UI is genius and the tutorial was easy to follow and simple, the language was proper and the dialogues seemed right(compared to several other games where the language in the conversations are a bit off or odd).
I honestly liked everything about the game so far, only issue is that there isn't enough of it xD.
The UI is certainly the high-point here and I dont mean that in a bad way. Its clean, well-thought out and looks very professional as well and giving this game a very destinct feel from the copy and paste-menus of most games like this.
And the overall art-style is also pretty high. This clearly has some high production value here.
Yes, so far it was very promising! I thought the language was actually very good (as opposed to somebody complaining on a certain forum) and the quantity of text was good (some other games have problems with writing too much [but saying nothing]).
The financial logic of the story is silly but I think it should be taken as a kind of humor set up.
The flag is a problem in one country with lots of gamers. Wouldn't be fair if a video showed the game that way after an apology and announcing it will be replaced.
By the way, I have to agree with Devious - the tutorial in the beginning was good. Only a few icons were a bit easy to miss but compared to how other games overload the UI this is very friendly
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was it a new version? it says it is still in v0.1 not v0.1.2
it is explained in the devlog
the art is amazing, I loved it, I'm really looking forward to the next update. in fact, i'm brazilian and i don't know a lot of english, but i liked it just the same.
Hi, this isn't directly related to the game, but what happened to the discord server? Will a second one be made if it was really hacked? Also I love the game so far, the art is beautiful.
Yes the discord was well hacked more precisely my account, I had to create a new discord, everything is back in order.
All I can say is wow ... im shocked at how good this looks the charachters, the backgrounds, the ui everything just seems to be perfect. I admire your work and couldn't be more exited for the next update. Keep up the good work!!!
Thank you very much for your message which goes straight to my heart.
Ayyy i look good as fuck in this game! Just wanted to thank u for the artwork!
Thank you,sir!
wish u a good day! The game is sadly very short but i hope in the next Update that i can kick this Bully's ass after i train.
Hi im Lovetiop from youtube that start a new um this dating sim is good but when is next update coming?
https://twitter.com/ExtraLife_nsfw/status/1396185776006774784?s=20
I let out the deepest, loudest groan of despair and agony when the game stopped as I was going to the park. I want MORE! The art and the unique UI feels VERY PREMIUM and the plot (while a little generic) has a really special feel to it. The characters for me are the most interesting part, especially the sister. The fuckin thumbnails made me so excited for that scene with the sister ( you tease >:[ )
The dialogue is great! It feels natural and flows well, environment art is top notch, im usually a hard critique when it comes to the comedy but the humor in this one, i'll let it pass lol. And while i've said this before, the UI is certainly one of, if not, the best i've seen in any VN. For me, making a great UI isn't a hard thing to accomplish with a great imagination but you've done it, bravo.
The only criticisms i can give are:
-The Tutorial. I really liked the concept, it is slick and smooth. However, the tools become really hard to see, and for casual, clicky VN players like me, you tend to miss a bit of tools and how they work. I would suggest arrows, more highlighting, or even scaling it up for a second for the player to notice easily.
-The Hidden Money. I didn't really like that mini-system, it gets really tiring for a while clicking everywhere on the screen in hopes of getting free money. The best you can do with it is to tweak it so that the money is actually visible and you'd actually have to use your eyes to get them, doesn't matter if the art is small or not, just make it be that there is a visual advantage.
-The MC's look. This is more of a personal critic for me but i was hoping you could make the MC stand out more. He looks really plain and generic and it kind of bothers me. It's up to you though, no pressure.
Great game solid 9/10, I literally cannot wait for more. I am at the point of refreshing this page everyday for updates :P
I couldn't leave such a constructive comment without answering for too long. Thanks for all these compliments, it made my day.
I spent a lot of time designing the game's UI, I didn't like it, too static, too basic, boring to death. I even hired an artist specialized in ui but I didn't like the rendering either...
I decided to do it myself in the end and I don't regret the result.
For the tutorial I agree, some arrows would not be too much. I couldn't find any good brushes so I preferred to leave them empty rather than putting something ugly.
The hidden money is an obviously controversial mechanic, but I repeat it is not obligatory. It just gives a bonus of money (which is not useful for the moment). In v0.2 the points where the money is hidden will be indicated except in the new backgrounds.
The look of the mc is generic and it's a choice that has been wanted, the game will follow a shonen/seinen type of development, so the look is likely to change over time.
There is no need to update the page, version 0.2 was announced in late June and early July, the bosses will be able to play it 3 weeks before everyone else.
Gambare !
Hi again, it's an honor to be replied by you :)
Knowing how you made the UI by yourself in the end makes me really proud. All the hard work has paid off and you delivered such an excellent work. Hard to believe this is just the first version of the game, lol.
Regarding the hidden money, I didn't even know that it was such a controversial thing, but I completely understand. Though It's nice to know that the mechanic will be tweaked/taken initiative in the near future. After all it's just the first version of the game.
About the MC's look, holy cow, that mention of the shounen/seinen type of development really caught me off guard. Now im REALLY intrigued on what this game has in store for us. I really can't wait, haven't seen VN's like these with a future so promising and bright (I've read your Patreon page). And just like that, im fine with the MC looking like that now.
I'm very glad that we have authors like you in the VN industry. I hope you and your hardworking team eventually get all the support that you all deserve to deliver an excellent VN. That being said, I would definitely support you no doubt if I have the opportunity, maybe in the near future. We're all in this together... Can't wait for what you have for us next in this beautiful game, goodluck and godspeed!
Sincerely, me.
P.S. Sorry for the bad grammar, English isn't my first language.
Thanks for these kind words Gabinajo, we try to continue as long as possible ;)
This is a really wholesome interaction.
Also by the way, your English is absolutely perfect (better than 90% native speakers). You should never doubt your English skills again.
Thanks man :,)
honestly, I thought you were a native speaker. Very good!
great begining of a game, not so much playble right now but i'll follow this one, waiting for 0.2
geart ART
great writing
I want to play the full version one day.
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the game :)
Mate I tried playing this on android and it keeps crashing I'm on samsung a11 anyway to fix this the game looks like it has a lot of potential
Okay i just want to say, the game is very laggy on my laptop although it's a great game overall.
There are so many guys I hope you will not turn it into NTR.. Just please Don't
Just tried the game. I think the plot outlined is def interesting and the characters are fairly well established. I do have a few gripes however.
My first gripe is the system for locating the hidden money wastes a lot of valuable story time. This can be easily dealt with by just adding little cash icons littered throughout each area if you chose to keep the system. This will tell players what to look for rather than being forced to spam click the map in a desperate bid to gain a little more cash.
My second issue is that one of the most important locations you need to improve your stats, the park, is not currently available and this stops you from progressing toward the starting goals set forth by the game. This is an issue because it stops the players from doing the most basic of story progress.
As I said at the start of the comment I believe this has potential to be a very good story but at present it is not what I would call a "playable game".
Bruh. My guy, the game ain't finished.
I like the concept but I'll hold off for now, just doesn't sit right with me, feels like a cash grab right now, think I'll come back in a few months and see if I've been proven wrong.
Androids touch function seems pretty unstable, had a pretty hard time when first launching and had to click some spots several times to get it to activate. Wasn't much to do at all, when's the next update?
I can't find the park in android. There hasn't marked park in the map
Park isn't implemented yet.
This game is grand, I actually downloaded it cause It showed here and on GameJolt as well.
When is the next update?
The game ended before i went to the park, my disappointment is immeasurable, and my day is ruined, just joking nice star of the game
It's a great game, but how does one go to the park??
Thank you,
Everything is indicated, either you have reached the end of the game and if you move the mouse over the park it indicates that it will be available at v0.2 or you want to access it directly and you have not read the objectives on the left side of the screen
Great game.😍
A smooth start with solid foundation. As other people stated, UI is the first thing I liked. It's very clean and easy to use. Art is beautiful, characters seem to have a variety of unique personalities, story is intriguing with the mysteries we have. In short, great start for a great game :)
Thanks a lot, there are high expectations, I will do my best not to disappoint people :)
i love it
A strong start, the art is awesom
Thanks, and what is to come will be even better ;)
I really love the idea and stuff. The art style is awesome! I can see this game has high potential. And I love how he has a Dreamcast :P
I'm curious are you going to do some activities to level relationships? Like playing the console, or watching a movie, or going mall (if there is one that is) with the person you want to get to know better.
Yes it is indeed planned, the content of the game will gradually expand with the updates
damn, this game was lit, the MC, the art style, the map!, the concept, theme! especially the UI is stunning, great work, the journal kinda thingy(quests section) is really handy and so easy to access.... can't wait for this in the further updates....and the Yoooooo sound makes me funny idk maybe because I only heard it often in meme xD... good day
-robi
Thanks for your comment, I'm glad you liked this little effect
yo al ver la portada
se ve de puta madre y me encanta la interfaz minimalista
I agree with all the other comments, great art style, the UI is very clean and the story is interesting. I'm looking forward to how things progress.
The only gripe that I have is the locking of other dialogue options once one is selected. I like to see what characters have to say to the choices I make even if I've already decided on one. Having to save before a choice and then loading that save each time you want to see what the response would have been is a little annoying.
Hi, thanks for your feedback, I understand that blocked choices can generate some frustration. For the moment you are the first one to tell me, if ever I receive more feedback of this type, I will unblock the choices :)
First of all, the art is phenomenal.
The story set up is also really nice, the UI is genius and the tutorial was easy to follow and simple, the language was proper and the dialogues seemed right(compared to several other games where the language in the conversations are a bit off or odd).
I honestly liked everything about the game so far, only issue is that there isn't enough of it xD.
I'm very excited for future updates!
Thanks for your feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed the game, I'm already working on the next version.
The UI is certainly the high-point here and I dont mean that in a bad way. Its clean, well-thought out and looks very professional as well and giving this game a very destinct feel from the copy and paste-menus of most games like this.
And the overall art-style is also pretty high. This clearly has some high production value here.
I always liked web design, and especially minimalism,
"less is more"
The art is absolutely amazing, and whoever made the UI deserves a raise. Excited to see where this goes!
Thank you sir!
beautiful art!
Thanks a lot for your let's play, I hope you enjoyed playing the game? I see that you have blurred the flag, it will be corrected very soon
Yes, so far it was very promising! I thought the language was actually very good (as opposed to somebody complaining on a certain forum) and the quantity of text was good (some other games have problems with writing too much [but saying nothing]).
The financial logic of the story is silly but I think it should be taken as a kind of humor set up.
The flag is a problem in one country with lots of gamers. Wouldn't be fair if a video showed the game that way after an apology and announcing it will be replaced.
By the way, I have to agree with Devious - the tutorial in the beginning was good. Only a few icons were a bit easy to miss but compared to how other games overload the UI this is very friendly