The download link looks suspicious the logo is shown for linux but the file name says mac! While the platform support is not mentioning about mac at all... I thought of mentioning it in the discord channel but I can't find the proper channel for asking that question. The #rules says to only ask questions in #ask-creator but there is no such thing.
look the message "It says that you have finished version 0.1",the park is available is v0.2, which is available for patrons 15$ since a few days, for all patrons on July 2, and for everyone on July 9
Mann, this game is gold i can already see How good this will be in future, oh and you can say If you plan to put some feet fetish in the game? I really think that the "sister" will be perfect for this
I just subscribed as a patreon but when downloading from there it is the same file as the free version. Does it have to do with the subscription level?
love this game it blew away my expectations i had for it. this is the only game that made me want to leave a review im looking forward to the future of this game. also don't overwork yourself and remember to take breaks.
I played the game when it first released which I never left a review, I must be crazy not to. I have to right off the bat, I love this game. It has it's own touch for a VN I don't play a lot of VN's but this easily one of the best ones I've played. For how little content there is I find the characters enjoyable, the art style, the music, the map, UI, just everything I enjoyed. I went in with some expectations but they were blown to another dimension. I love the amount of effort you put into this, keep it up.
The new version of the game, 0.2, will arrive on June 25th for the 15$ patrons, it will be available one week later for all other patrons, the public will be able to access it for free one week later ;)
I found a bug, you can take a nap till the night and the next day noriko have the same dialogue night, btw you can skip whole week with this. Im playing on android
the art is amazing, I loved it, I'm really looking forward to the next update. in fact, i'm brazilian and i don't know a lot of english, but i liked it just the same.
Hi, this isn't directly related to the game, but what happened to the discord server? Will a second one be made if it was really hacked? Also I love the game so far, the art is beautiful.
All I can say is wow ... im shocked at how good this looks the charachters, the backgrounds, the ui everything just seems to be perfect. I admire your work and couldn't be more exited for the next update. Keep up the good work!!!
I let out the deepest, loudest groan of despair and agony when the game stopped as I was going to the park. I want MORE! The art and the unique UI feels VERY PREMIUM and the plot (while a little generic) has a really special feel to it. The characters for me are the most interesting part, especially the sister. The fuckin thumbnails made me so excited for that scene with the sister ( you tease >:[ )
The dialogue is great! It feels natural and flows well, environment art is top notch, im usually a hard critique when it comes to the comedy but the humor in this one, i'll let it pass lol. And while i've said this before, the UI is certainly one of, if not, the best i've seen in any VN. For me, making a great UI isn't a hard thing to accomplish with a great imagination but you've done it, bravo.
The only criticisms i can give are:
-The Tutorial. I really liked the concept, it is slick and smooth. However, the tools become really hard to see, and for casual, clicky VN players like me, you tend to miss a bit of tools and how they work. I would suggest arrows, more highlighting, or even scaling it up for a second for the player to notice easily.
-The Hidden Money. I didn't really like that mini-system, it gets really tiring for a while clicking everywhere on the screen in hopes of getting free money. The best you can do with it is to tweak it so that the money is actually visible and you'd actually have to use your eyes to get them, doesn't matter if the art is small or not, just make it be that there is a visual advantage.
-The MC's look. This is more of a personal critic for me but i was hoping you could make the MC stand out more. He looks really plain and generic and it kind of bothers me. It's up to you though, no pressure.
Great game solid 9/10, I literally cannot wait for more. I am at the point of refreshing this page everyday for updates :P
I couldn't leave such a constructive comment without answering for too long. Thanks for all these compliments, it made my day.
I spent a lot of time designing the game's UI, I didn't like it, too static, too basic, boring to death. I even hired an artist specialized in ui but I didn't like the rendering either...
I decided to do it myself in the end and I don't regret the result.
For the tutorial I agree, some arrows would not be too much. I couldn't find any good brushes so I preferred to leave them empty rather than putting something ugly.
The hidden money is an obviously controversial mechanic, but I repeat it is not obligatory. It just gives a bonus of money (which is not useful for the moment). In v0.2 the points where the money is hidden will be indicated except in the new backgrounds.
The look of the mc is generic and it's a choice that has been wanted, the game will follow a shonen/seinen type of development, so the look is likely to change over time.
There is no need to update the page, version 0.2 was announced in late June and early July, the bosses will be able to play it 3 weeks before everyone else.
Knowing how you made the UI by yourself in the end makes me really proud. All the hard work has paid off and you delivered such an excellent work. Hard to believe this is just the first version of the game, lol.
Regarding the hidden money, I didn't even know that it was such a controversial thing, but I completely understand. Though It's nice to know that the mechanic will be tweaked/taken initiative in the near future. After all it's just the first version of the game.
About the MC's look, holy cow, that mention of the shounen/seinen type of development really caught me off guard. Now im REALLY intrigued on what this game has in store for us. I really can't wait, haven't seen VN's like these with a future so promising and bright (I've read your Patreon page). And just like that, im fine with the MC looking like that now.
I'm very glad that we have authors like you in the VN industry. I hope you and your hardworking team eventually get all the support that you all deserve to deliver an excellent VN. That being said, I would definitely support you no doubt if I have the opportunity, maybe in the near future. We're all in this together... Can't wait for what you have for us next in this beautiful game, goodluck and godspeed!
Sincerely, me.
P.S. Sorry for the bad grammar, English isn't my first language.
Just tried the game. I think the plot outlined is def interesting and the characters are fairly well established. I do have a few gripes however.
My first gripe is the system for locating the hidden money wastes a lot of valuable story time. This can be easily dealt with by just adding little cash icons littered throughout each area if you chose to keep the system. This will tell players what to look for rather than being forced to spam click the map in a desperate bid to gain a little more cash.
My second issue is that one of the most important locations you need to improve your stats, the park, is not currently available and this stops you from progressing toward the starting goals set forth by the game. This is an issue because it stops the players from doing the most basic of story progress.
As I said at the start of the comment I believe this has potential to be a very good story but at present it is not what I would call a "playable game".
I like the concept but I'll hold off for now, just doesn't sit right with me, feels like a cash grab right now, think I'll come back in a few months and see if I've been proven wrong.
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The game has an error after i pick up the tape at the park
I too have a game crashing error at this point in the game
The download link looks suspicious the logo is shown for linux but the file name says mac! While the platform support is not mentioning about mac at all...
I thought of mentioning it in the discord channel but I can't find the proper channel for asking that question. The #rules says to only ask questions in #ask-creator but there is no such thing.
I can't seem to talk to macumba for the first day of training on android it just shows him for a sec and just goes back to normal what can I do?
Not only for Macumba but also any dialogue as well. It happened after going to sleep the day I gave the walkman to him.
The update ends on there, you gotta wait for next update.
really? That's an update I am not complaining just surprised that's all?
Yeah you can see the text at the top of your screen, "You have completed V0. 2, find all the hidden money to unlock cheats".
Wait so that's all that's all that out so far? Like 45 minutes of gameplay?
im finishing this about 10 minute lmao
Does the new update ends on Find the WiFi Router? Or it's me blind can't see the router
Oh never mind, I was on phone so it was hard to click it like I might miss the router because it's too small and I have my big finger..
Wifi Router?
Yes, you need to turn it off so you can get in Noriko room's.
When july 9
Uhh... 5 days from now I guess...
when will v0.2 be realease
v0.2.1 already released for patrons, 9 july for everyone
I know it's really dumb to ask this, but can anyone please tell me what should I do next to save name?
enter
I entered name but after that I didn't get option to save
because the name is registered automatically
So, I should wait for sometime after entering name?
hi, one question, where the heck is the park? it doesnt have a locator icon on the map. am i missing something?
yes look at bottom left of the screen
ty!
here is the bottom left of my screen, i see no 4th marker for the park
same
look the message "It says that you have finished version 0.1",the park is available is v0.2, which is available for patrons 15$ since a few days, for all patrons on July 2, and for everyone on July 9
Thank you for giving it for free after 1 week. As a fan I really appreciate it, keep up the great work I'm about to buy the Patreon soon.
guys why its always force close while im wanna going out, at map in ther corner bottom?
Mann, this game is gold i can already see How good this will be in future, oh and you can say If you plan to put some feet fetish in the game? I really think that the "sister" will be perfect for this
What date release new version
yesterday for patrons
Okay will release tell me plz I hope you understand my english I'm so bad in English😅
yesterday
I just subscribed as a patreon but when downloading from there it is the same file as the free version.
Does it have to do with the subscription level?
Come and discuss it on the discord, it will be easier for me to answer you :)
love this game it blew away my expectations i had for it. this is the only game that made me want to leave a review im looking forward to the future of this game. also don't overwork yourself and remember to take breaks.
I played the game when it first released which I never left a review, I must be crazy not to. I have to right off the bat, I love this game. It has it's own touch for a VN I don't play a lot of VN's but this easily one of the best ones I've played. For how little content there is I find the characters enjoyable, the art style, the music, the map, UI, just everything I enjoyed. I went in with some expectations but they were blown to another dimension. I love the amount of effort you put into this, keep it up.
Thank you , sir!
Please, i never play this tipe of games but i love urs, I realy like it i hope to se the the NEW Version soon!!!
The new version of the game, 0.2, will arrive on June 25th for the 15$ patrons, it will be available one week later for all other patrons, the public will be able to access it for free one week later ;)
What is the name of the menu music?
will you make one for windows?
already did
Oh, I didn't see it say for windows
I have a really out of date computer, and am used to seeing bugs with open gl running, but this game won't even let me try :(
Maybe you need a new one... 400€ and you have something that cost 1200€ two years ago. :) think about it
some people are just poor bro
Cant argue against that...
Quits as soon as i l eave the room android
the room
I had the same deal but the dev told me that they are trying to fix it
this game is so good in its opening i hope for the ext update, btw i heard there was a discord can i have a link. thank you
you just have to click on the discord icon in the main menu
unresponsive
Just want to make sure, does this version ended after the first day? because I can't go to the park next morning.
Looking forward to more update
I found a bug, you can take a nap till the night and the next day noriko have the same dialogue night, btw you can skip whole week with this. Im playing on android
when it continues you can add pregnancy
*Chef kiss*
No sex?
It's a new game why you try to fucking understand it mate?
was it a new version? it says it is still in v0.1 not v0.1.2
it is explained in the devlog
the art is amazing, I loved it, I'm really looking forward to the next update. in fact, i'm brazilian and i don't know a lot of english, but i liked it just the same.
Hi, this isn't directly related to the game, but what happened to the discord server? Will a second one be made if it was really hacked? Also I love the game so far, the art is beautiful.
Yes the discord was well hacked more precisely my account, I had to create a new discord, everything is back in order.
All I can say is wow ... im shocked at how good this looks the charachters, the backgrounds, the ui everything just seems to be perfect. I admire your work and couldn't be more exited for the next update. Keep up the good work!!!
Thank you very much for your message which goes straight to my heart.
Ayyy i look good as fuck in this game! Just wanted to thank u for the artwork!
Thank you,sir!
wish u a good day! The game is sadly very short but i hope in the next Update that i can kick this Bully's ass after i train.
Hi im Lovetiop from youtube that start a new um this dating sim is good but when is next update coming?
https://twitter.com/ExtraLife_nsfw/status/1396185776006774784?s=20
I let out the deepest, loudest groan of despair and agony when the game stopped as I was going to the park. I want MORE! The art and the unique UI feels VERY PREMIUM and the plot (while a little generic) has a really special feel to it. The characters for me are the most interesting part, especially the sister. The fuckin thumbnails made me so excited for that scene with the sister ( you tease >:[ )
The dialogue is great! It feels natural and flows well, environment art is top notch, im usually a hard critique when it comes to the comedy but the humor in this one, i'll let it pass lol. And while i've said this before, the UI is certainly one of, if not, the best i've seen in any VN. For me, making a great UI isn't a hard thing to accomplish with a great imagination but you've done it, bravo.
The only criticisms i can give are:
-The Tutorial. I really liked the concept, it is slick and smooth. However, the tools become really hard to see, and for casual, clicky VN players like me, you tend to miss a bit of tools and how they work. I would suggest arrows, more highlighting, or even scaling it up for a second for the player to notice easily.
-The Hidden Money. I didn't really like that mini-system, it gets really tiring for a while clicking everywhere on the screen in hopes of getting free money. The best you can do with it is to tweak it so that the money is actually visible and you'd actually have to use your eyes to get them, doesn't matter if the art is small or not, just make it be that there is a visual advantage.
-The MC's look. This is more of a personal critic for me but i was hoping you could make the MC stand out more. He looks really plain and generic and it kind of bothers me. It's up to you though, no pressure.
Great game solid 9/10, I literally cannot wait for more. I am at the point of refreshing this page everyday for updates :P
I couldn't leave such a constructive comment without answering for too long. Thanks for all these compliments, it made my day.
I spent a lot of time designing the game's UI, I didn't like it, too static, too basic, boring to death. I even hired an artist specialized in ui but I didn't like the rendering either...
I decided to do it myself in the end and I don't regret the result.
For the tutorial I agree, some arrows would not be too much. I couldn't find any good brushes so I preferred to leave them empty rather than putting something ugly.
The hidden money is an obviously controversial mechanic, but I repeat it is not obligatory. It just gives a bonus of money (which is not useful for the moment). In v0.2 the points where the money is hidden will be indicated except in the new backgrounds.
The look of the mc is generic and it's a choice that has been wanted, the game will follow a shonen/seinen type of development, so the look is likely to change over time.
There is no need to update the page, version 0.2 was announced in late June and early July, the bosses will be able to play it 3 weeks before everyone else.
Gambare !
Hi again, it's an honor to be replied by you :)
Knowing how you made the UI by yourself in the end makes me really proud. All the hard work has paid off and you delivered such an excellent work. Hard to believe this is just the first version of the game, lol.
Regarding the hidden money, I didn't even know that it was such a controversial thing, but I completely understand. Though It's nice to know that the mechanic will be tweaked/taken initiative in the near future. After all it's just the first version of the game.
About the MC's look, holy cow, that mention of the shounen/seinen type of development really caught me off guard. Now im REALLY intrigued on what this game has in store for us. I really can't wait, haven't seen VN's like these with a future so promising and bright (I've read your Patreon page). And just like that, im fine with the MC looking like that now.
I'm very glad that we have authors like you in the VN industry. I hope you and your hardworking team eventually get all the support that you all deserve to deliver an excellent VN. That being said, I would definitely support you no doubt if I have the opportunity, maybe in the near future. We're all in this together... Can't wait for what you have for us next in this beautiful game, goodluck and godspeed!
Sincerely, me.
P.S. Sorry for the bad grammar, English isn't my first language.
Thanks for these kind words Gabinajo, we try to continue as long as possible ;)
This is a really wholesome interaction.
Also by the way, your English is absolutely perfect (better than 90% native speakers). You should never doubt your English skills again.
Thanks man :,)
honestly, I thought you were a native speaker. Very good!
great begining of a game, not so much playble right now but i'll follow this one, waiting for 0.2
geart ART
great writing
I want to play the full version one day.
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the game :)
Mate I tried playing this on android and it keeps crashing I'm on samsung a11 anyway to fix this the game looks like it has a lot of potential
Okay i just want to say, the game is very laggy on my laptop although it's a great game overall.
There are so many guys I hope you will not turn it into NTR.. Just please Don't
Just tried the game. I think the plot outlined is def interesting and the characters are fairly well established. I do have a few gripes however.
My first gripe is the system for locating the hidden money wastes a lot of valuable story time. This can be easily dealt with by just adding little cash icons littered throughout each area if you chose to keep the system. This will tell players what to look for rather than being forced to spam click the map in a desperate bid to gain a little more cash.
My second issue is that one of the most important locations you need to improve your stats, the park, is not currently available and this stops you from progressing toward the starting goals set forth by the game. This is an issue because it stops the players from doing the most basic of story progress.
As I said at the start of the comment I believe this has potential to be a very good story but at present it is not what I would call a "playable game".
Bruh. My guy, the game ain't finished.
I like the concept but I'll hold off for now, just doesn't sit right with me, feels like a cash grab right now, think I'll come back in a few months and see if I've been proven wrong.